[@Deadnaut]Okay, so Ariana is looking good so far- most of my critiques go towards machines, not the characters, and since you don't have a machine, welp, there's not much to critique. Ariana is almost [i]too[/i] hopeful and naive for my liking. [i]Almost[/i]. Anyway, she mixes a good amount of hopefulness with a decent amount of qualifications (if untrained) which would make sense/likely be required if she's being attached to a special forces unit. Background looks fine, psyche looks good. She won't have a callsign, not until she's flown her first mission/done her first stupid thing/made her first kill/ticked off her first squadron-mate, etc. As for what machine she will be flying, it all depends on whether or not we have a character application for squadron leader.