While I agree the lego design was fairly sleek... It just takes something out of the character for me. I'll take a look over your character in  little while.


[@Hexaflexagon], most of my criticisms for you are technical. I find it highly unlikely that a well muscled man would weigh as little as 145. I'm not particularly muscular, but I'd like to consider myself thin and fit, I stand at 6'2" and weigh 170. I doubt a 3 inch difference in height would result in a 25 lbs difference in weight. 

Your character sheet also changes between using "he" and "she" quite a lot, so that could be sorted out. 

Huh, frankly, I'm surprised you gimped yourself by giving Trapp a bog standard Sentry- though I guess it isn't the MAS that makes the man. To be honest, I purposely designed the Sentry to be kind of bad.. Especially when compared to something like a Sentinel or Sparrow (hell, even the Sparrow wasn't designed very well). You sure you want a Sentry?