[quote=@vietmyke]
While I agree the lego design was fairly sleek... It just takes something out of the character for me. I'll take a look over your character in  little while.


[@Hexaflexagon], most of my criticisms for you are technical. I find it highly unlikely that a well muscled man would weigh as little as 145. I'm not particularly muscular, but I'd like to consider myself thin and fit, I stand at 6'2" and weigh 170. I doubt a 3 inch difference in height would result in a 25 lbs difference in weight. 

Your character sheet also changes between using "he" and "she" quite a lot, so that could be sorted out. 

Huh, frankly, I'm surprised you gimped yourself by giving Trapp a bog standard Sentry- though I guess it isn't the MAS that makes the man. To be honest, I purposely designed the Sentry to be kind of bad.. Especially when compared to something like a Sentinel or Sparrow (hell, even the Sparrow wasn't designed very well). You sure you want a Sentry?
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Ah yah, I was unsure about his gender at the start so it changed a couple of times. Some of the shes must have been left in. 

His height and weight, well I could pump up the weight if you want. Though  being 5'11" and 145 lbs you can still pack on some solid muscle and look well defined. Look at [url=http://www.tapology.com/fightcenter/fighters/pat-curran-junior]Pat Curran[/url], a MMA fighter who is in the Featherweight class for example.

And well I felt I did not want to make him too overpowered. XD Already being considered an "ace" and everything. In my interpenetration of an Ace is being able to use what you have to the best of its abilities. Even if that means being in a walking coffin. And my other reasoning is that since in his back story he spent most of his training in the sen MK1 simulator he would naturally gravitate towards the sentinel line of macheins anyway. But if you want I can write up a new mech.