[@Prince of Seraphs]All winning entries in the senior-team-creation contests will be featured later. [quote=@Forsythe] [@Lugubrious]: Done with my entry for the contest, however I'm blatantly disregarding this: because a), I'd rather not win than to and hell will freeze over before I post a deus ex machined cliffhanger, and b) you kinda contradict yourself there: so I just picked one that suited my story better :confused [/quote] It's not a contradiction because the motives remain hidden to your character [i]until[/i] the traitor explains them. There has probably been a reason for the traitor for a long time, but your character hasn't known about them or at the very least isn't expecting an attempt of their life, so it's not a deus ex machina either, because it doesn't come from nowhere. [@Harinezumikouken] Everything seems to be in order. [@Skyrte] Gotcha, thanks for noticing that.