I see only a few things to note. ^^ As for issues with it, only one minor one to note. This Rp will have out character's upgrade as we progress and achieve better skills/equipment/powers and what have you, and with that as well as the note about Starting Armor, Ebony and Dragonbone are relatively high. Especially since Dragonbone has yet to become a resource. The rise of the Dragon isn't in full swing yet, Alduin is just in the stages of raising his Generals(The named Dragons who you find in the primary burial grounds) and the "Army" as it is referred too, wouldn't be up yet and even less would be dying. Those notes together, I would say downscale the armor a bit, but that is only my note & vote. My second thing, is the talk of Lycanthropy, which I think should be kept to Roze's decision of no more of them. Admittedly I am the only one of us with Lycan Character, and that probably makes me seem Selfish, but I am really not. I write primal/hunter/druid/beastmaster characters. That is just who I am as a writer. Much like your own character, Rawlith and Varnadiir are among my earliest Elder Scrolls, with Rawlith being literally my oldest started way back when Morrowind was first released. They have had a long history, sometimes even together in certain rps, and the same will end up happening here in the latter part of the Rp. Again, I don't want it to come off as selfish, we just ultimately don't want to many running around. ^^ But all in all, good character. It is rather nostalgic with his backstory generally being the Intro of the game. ^^ I like the involvement of Valdr's Dagger and his side-quest too. XD