[h2]Time for evaluation and constructive criticism[/h2] [img]http://33.media.tumblr.com/13b4637c6721efbf8ccd4cbe3574a181/tumblr_n933tnTmri1s74h99o5_400.gif[/img] I'm not only your kawaii GM and nakama but I too have standards. So guys the purpose of this evaluation and CnC is to learn and better ourselves and learn from the past and flaws he have to execute a better writing for everything we and no matter what we do. You may write in essay form. I'm not an elitist to do this but as a person with its set of beliefs and standards, passion, compassion, conviction, confidence, and love. [h3]Characters[/h3] [img]https://31.media.tumblr.com/1f9c7c5e3923d7d0aa3cdaf943f429e5/tumblr_inline_n3n5nlXCD31qjn9tl.jpg[/img] The characters, your favorites and whatnot. The good and the bad? What can we all do to make it better? What captivates us? This also include their magic and uniqueness. [h3]The Story[/h3] [img]https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR9CXL5H1QPKKmbh6bb8alDj67C15bGR714-z_EFR0aC-FBbCaW[/img] Free roam or not, major arc/side arc it still is a story. The good and the bad? Pacing and all that. What can we all do to make it better? What captivates us? Predictable or not, cliche or not. [h3]Members and their writing[/h3] [img]http://livedoor.4.blogimg.jp/netagazou_okiba/imgs/e/4/e48d39cc.gif[/img] Directed to each and everyone of us. What do you like about the writing of this member and what you don't like about it? How to make it better? Also tell us what you like and don't like about the players. We're all nakama and we have to be honest. [h3]Suggestions for the better[/h3] [img]https://secure.static.tumblr.com/ce647e4993cd598f80d599f74c941944/yvvhsdp/ZOEnk02yj/tumblr_static_tumblr_static__640.jpg[/img] What is it? We have prospered for 2 arcs and a mini arc, it is a wonderful thing that happened to us. Be honest with what you are about to say, keep it civil, don't sugarcoat. Even if the truth hurts, it is for the best and we will learn from it. This also includes what you want to happen and all. We will cater to it.