[@Kimiyosis] okay, so keep in mind that I am currently on my phone, so formatting for this post may or may not be a little off. 

In regards to your character: you use both "his" and "her" in your character sheet, so you should go through and fix that. 

I don't think I'll allow the cybernetic eye to link up with computer systems. It may be programmed to specifically and her in the operation of her custom machine. 

Callsigns are nicknames given to pilots by other pilots in their squadron, and are neither official nor assigned by the top brass. Also "Calamity Queen" and "Calamity" are both a bit of a mouthful. Callsigns should be a short and easy to use, typically easier to use than someone's last name. IE. Brick, Wizard, Odin. All are short and sweet. 

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