[quote=@Silverlight138] To answer your first request, no I wasn't able to find an adequate picture to summarize how she looks like in her current state. Thus, to make up for that, I provided lengthy descriptions in my character sheet. Regarding the latter part of your msg, I sort of sneaked in her personality description under bio. But if you'd prefer it, then yes, sure, I can input something under personality. Also, for the sake of everyone's convenience, I'll rename her Zaneria. [/quote] You seem to miss the point of the name. You can keep her original name, just shorten it with a nickname into something that citizens wouldn't feel they were tripping over when they said it, like 'Eldvi' or something. I don't care. I want the personality where it belongs, in the personality tab. Your first picture shows her original self and hides a lot of her features. With her new appearance, those would be showing. You can keep your description of what she looks like (Please move that under 'appearance' as well instead of where you currently have it) but have another photo of what she looks like now, just as a reference of what to go off of. There is no description of hair or eyes so I really don't have any idea of what she truly looks like, which is why I implore you, for the last time, for a photo of her without her garb. It's not difficult to follow simple directions, and put things in their proper place. Right now you're showing me you can't follow basic instructions. Fix this as soon as you can. I will go over your CS in depth later. [quote=@Mr_pink] Let's go with 42 [/quote] He would be 22 then when the angels descended and have a pretty good opinion on how quickly the world shifted around him. (it was only twenty years ago, not a long time for Earth to become the highly futuristic and developed New Society it is today)