[quote]The clunking and clattering of a old APC echoed around the grassy fields of the border, the APC itself was old and withered, being surplus equipment from WW1. A tall Serbian soldier peeked out the top hole of the APC, looking down the mounted machine gun as the APC continued it’s patrol. The sun rapidly sunk lower in the sky as the light faded, being replaced by the looming moon and the twinkling stars.[/quote]

Dat is a lot of APC. In the future, you might try doing something like this.

[i]"The clunking and clattering of a old APC echoed around the grassy fields of the border. [u]It[/u] was [u]an[/u] old and withered [u]machine[/u], being surplus equipment from WW1. A tall Serbian soldier peeked out the top hole of the [u]vehicle[/u], looking down the mounted machine gun as [u]it[/u] continued it’s patrol. The sun rapidly sunk lower in the sky as the light faded, being replaced by the looming moon and the twinkling stars."[/i]