[quote=@WriterRaven]
Commentary on the sheets so far:

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There are several points here that I find questionable.
- A confident, charismatic... doubting, harsh-on-himself pessimist. This is rather contradictory to me.
- I'm not seeing mention of Warriors in the bio, and yet your character's always wanted to be one.
- Why does he have a PokéLink, a device exclusive to Sengun, when he's from Sinnoh?
- Chimchar isn't available for collection at Ilex Laboratories.
- - All Pokémon chosen as a starter begin at level 5, rather than 4.
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Thank you the feedback, I'll fix those!