[quote=@azarhiro] I.....see. Well welcome aboard? [/quote] [i][Simon Cowell voice][/i] It's a no from me. [img]http://arcadey.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/09/Simon-Cowell-Gif.gif[/img] [@nerminator] I'm gonna assume [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/77597-moonlight-sonata-eternal-melody/char#post-2456649]the character you posted, Jack,[/url] was a joke. That being said, jokes are great and welcomed here--hell, I love snark! It's what gets me up in the morning. Even GM's char, [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/77597-moonlight-sonata-eternal-melody/char#post-2457377]Blake[/url], needs to be taken with a spoon of salt and a sense of humor. Cynder and I have discussed Jack, however. The joke that's being made with him might strike some readers as [i]distasteful.[/i] Moreover, as GM put it, "[you've"] completely let character development shoot over [your] head". While parts of the character may be humorous and played off as as satire, Jack's complete characterization is just one big attempt at a joke, which will make it very difficult to play him seriously in this [i]actually serious[/i] roleplay and make interacting with him difficult for other players. Not to be harsh, Nerm, but from what we've seen of [i]other[/i] rp's you've been in, you don't exactly write in a way that makes us think you can keep up with MS's rules. [hider=Particular Rule Entro's Referencing?] -Third person, past tense, A+ grammar and spelling, a few sentences at least. [/hider] So, [@nerminator] has been voted off the island.