[quote=@nerminator] Can we talk this over?, I haven't even finished my CS yet, thats why I put the big WIP in the top, right now your judging a half built character, Can you atleast let me finish my CS instead of just rejecting me?, let me learn atleast [i]Try[/i] to meet up with the expectations, and then you can be Free to judge away. PS I was also planning on adding a lot of character development, I wouldn't stay a lazy gamer for the entire RP [/quote] I'd love to do that, I'm a very patient person. Unfortunately, this RP is more about quality than quantity -- generally, we can tell if someone is going to make the requirements or not, even if their character sheet is not finished. There's really not much to talk over, however, and your character is still going to be rejected, especially if you have to note outside of the sheet that there will be development or not. A person should be able to tell if a character is serious or not, in this case, none of us really can. And I'm going to be up front and honest here, your character carries some content that could be borderline offensive if portrayed incorrectly. Is that a bad trait? Not necessarily. As writers, we must be willing to tackle stereotypes and content that can be seen as offensive, otherwise, all books and stories would probably suck. However, in order to do that, we have to write in style and execute it properly. From what I'm seeing, it maaay be very difficult with the angle you're taking it from. Bottomline is that we're rejecting you, because we have seen some of your other content and your character is not up to the "quality vs. quantity" standards that this RP carries. Sorry, but we're judging you now on past content, repeating mistakes and what we've seen so far from your character that was submitted.