[quote=@Darcs] Abstract writing is best writing. [/quote] I figured August would join the "incredibly complex and long winded descriptions using romantic language" club, seeing as so far she's just been logic logic logic. [quote=@Darcs] How is it that Mary is the only person that finds this hard to look away from? It doesn't even, I just don't, why would, how...? [/quote] August = reasons that I won't divulge. My characters are complicated.