All right, I'm back, and I'm somewhat recovered but now very tired. Let's go through what we have so far. I'll be commenting in point form along the way so I've tried to limit everything to one tag. I'll also answer any questions that were not previously answered to my specifications by my co-GM or by other applicants. Also also, the English major in me is going to come out in full force. Be ready for it.

[@Ganryu]
- I've never heard of anyone with Undertaker as a last name without the first name of "The". Might consider altering it.
- I'd like to see more on the appearance and personality. The trench coat alone is the article of clothing that usually sets off warning signs for me when reading characters. Especially if nothing is being worn underneath. Personality is less of a problem, I've done lazy before. It's just good to have some offsetting traits with it. That's not as big a problem though.
- The bio is a little tough to read with the run-on sentences and the inconsistent capitalization on landmarks, place names and species.

[@Liriia]
- I'm wondering how a native of Cianwood got a Hoenn-based egg like that. Aron is not a native Johto/Kanto species so it wouldn't be able to be found in any cave systems there. If Sybil is from Dewford, that would work.
- I'd like to know a bit more about what exactly is the extent of Sybil's archeological knowledge. How deep does it run? Does it come at the expense of other subjects? I mean it's definitely possible, given there was a trainee Scientist in the prior RP, just want to make sure it's not too outlandish.
-If you want to handicap Lapis at Lvl 2, that's your perrogative, but he gets levelled up just like the others.

[@Lizmichi]
- Fary is carrying an awful lot of stuff, as well as a pretty high-rolling cash stack. Given the way the currency system is going to work in Indigo, $3000 might be a bit much. Pokeballs are only going to be $2, so you have enough cash to make drowning a Moltres in broken balls a viable strategy. Might want to donate some of that to charity.
- "therefor" "She's sill hesitant" - Nitpicks I know, but again. English.

[@Lambi]
- I'm not sure Evolver is a class. I mean specialist, sure. But I'm stretching for that one. Really solid sheet here.

[@mictlan93]
- "Pokeblls". That's the only thing I could fine. Very well done sheet.

[@WriterRaven]
- Well as co-GM you're pretty well set in stone. Still, very well done.

[@hatakekuro]
- Much like in the games, it's not going to be possible for a PC to join with the primary antagonists of the RP. 
- I know a lot of the personality is going to built around being a Rocket but he does come off as a bit of a psychopath. Like I said, a given for an enemy, but Raven and I are going to be handling the Rocket interactions.
- $5000 is a bit much, even if you're working for a criminal organization. All the grunts I beat up in games barely had any money.
- No one is going to be starting off with any Mega Stones. You don't get them right away in the game, you don't get them right away here.
- No one is also going to be starting off with a shiny Pokemon, because then everyone is going to want one. If you are going to say you deserve a shiny, you're going to need a good reason why it is absolutely vital to your character's essence of being that their Pokemon be shiny and especial.
- Honestly, between the character's biography, back story and skill set, he's better set up to join the Mary Sue RP. Again, I know he's written based on Rocket acceptance but still, it's not a character that would possibly work in this context.

[@Howler]
- Again the bank account is too damn high. What kind of economy is this? All these kids running around with thousands of dollars. It's probably my fault for not explaining the pricing system in this Kanto, but yeah, still high.
- The talent is a bit oxymoronic compared to the personality. So he gives off this misanthropic teenage angst everywhere but is able to read people like an open book? I wouldn't think a teenager who's shutting himself off emotionally would have the ability to instantly read people. Something about life experience there. I wouldn't know. I couldn't read people at all. Mostly because of the low amount of contact growing up. But I digress.
- Gotta have some time spent in Unova to get your hands on an Axew. You can still have Clair as a catalyst and motivation, I'm fine with that, but you're not air mailing Pokemon over. Same as the others.

[@Stale Pizza]
- I'm not sure I can give you Route 13 for your lost Litwick. If you want to say Reversal Mountain, even on that little stretch outside of Undella, I think that's doable. However, I don't see a Fire/Ghost type ending up on a Route known for "Beaches and the Sparkling Sea"

[@Mortimer]
- ENGLISH GRAD ALERT! I'd really tidy up that appearance section. "looks like a fairly young man that still resembles a bit like a teenager who is slowly developing" has like five different qualifiers in it. "looks like a teenager who's still developing despite his age" is much better. Also, "leave them grow".
- I don't care if he bet Mark Xatuberg on the futures of Poke-Indonesia, $4500 is too high.
- I'm going to say right now the Legendary Pokemon are not going to be available for capture. Everyone knows all the legendaries were captured in miracle stretches 10 and seven years ago by a bunch of 10-12 year olds who proceeded to keep them locked in computers for the good of mankind. So Ho-oh is a no go.
- "craddle"

[@Nightrunner]
- To answer your question, nope. Escapist ex-pat.
- I'm not sure how much attention she would avoid detection carrying around a Michael Jordan-level amount of rings. If not the cops then another ill-behaved traveller sure would have lifted something. Might have to find a fence. I'll allow for a bump in money to accommodate this though. 

[@Plot Questions]
- I have literally the first half of the story completely mapped out. Consider it a four year work in progress. I also know exactly where the plot is going and it does factor in every aspect of the Kanto/Johto set of games as well as the anime, spanning the generations. The first couple of chapters will be more for exposition and getting to know the group, but the fun will start kicking off in Chapter 3.

[@Hella Cute]
- Yes, definitely still accepting applications. Hell my sheet's not even up yet. I just decided what I'm starting with.
- Yes, there are contest halls. Cerulean has become the main destination for Contests, following the lead of the Sensational Sisters of Cerulean, who embraced the format wholeheartedly and have the highest ranking hall in the nation. There is also a hall on the reclaimed Cinnabar Islands.

[@My Progress]
Like I said, sheets not ready. Been distracted with other things and I need sleep before work. I'll be aiming to get it done while I finish laundry tomorrow.