Ironic, considering how one of my characters has a spirit that looks exactly like a [b]Grim Reaper that has access to all kinds of magic.[/b] First off, the powers section is actually organized, which is good to know. I recommend you to add in explanations on the extent of the powers, as we don't know whether he can spread gigantic seas of flames or simply launch moderately-sized fire projectiles. An interesting system, though I doubt the amount of powers will increase because... well, again, Orean Cause is not exactly a combat school. Dead-Attractor sounds pretty annoying to those who have Ghost characters, considering how it basically limits the potential of interactions whenever this guy pops up. It seems more like a restriction-tool rather than a tool that could get him interacting with others. I recommend you to modify this a bit, or preferably, completely. Another thing I'd like to point out is the Biography. Fill it in. You don't need to explain his entire past; the background's primary purpose is to explain why they're going to Orean Cause in the first place. [s]I won't say anything about originality, but something about his nickname rings the wrong bell to me. It's as if it... popped out of RWBY or something. or maybe even Billy and Mandy, if anyone still knows about that show[/s] He seems like a character with potential, though. I like it :o