[quote=@RomanAria]
Ah, I am failing at making horrible posts. I actually can't write badly, I guess... O.o
I do think the bit about the profound love before they're even on the second page is a nice touch though, what about you guys?
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I thought it was pretty good. I couldn't help laughing just a bit when I read it. 

I know what you mean, though. I think maybe I'm trying too hard with mine or something. But I guess there's time to...not...improve....?