[hider=Opinions and shiz on Kabuto]He may not have a depressing past (another person Deathedge will love to hang out with if he throws aside his reputation), but holy shit, I've seen that very power (Limit Breaker) so many times in this site, I'm not even going to give feedback for it. It's the most shonen-as-f-ck thing to ever exist, I'll be honest. Also, there's one part in his Background that I really can't enjoy for some odd reason, and that's the part where it explains his feats outside of Orean Cause. I'm getting a feeling that you tried to be different in terms of Orean Causes's character roster, but if you look at Kabuto as a character himself, it feels worn out. Though the Weaknesses manages to make the power feel somewhat more original, that same weakness has also been used alongside the Limit Breaker archetype power. My feedback on the power is more opinion-based because in terms of balance, it's balanced, but in terms of originality and freshness... yeah. And I also have horrible memories of people using those kinds of powers in a really weird way, no matter how balanced they try to keep it. Maybe I'm the only one who sees it like this.[/hider] This guy likes people, animals, life, [b][u]AND[/u][/b] death and injustice. If he doesn't have a personality disorder (lol), you might want to do something about that. Pretty sure that's just a typo, though. xD [h1]tl;dr[/h1] He's a character who can stand out, but in terms of actual originality, he's a bit lacking. He's dangerously catering towards the Gary Stu archetype, so you might want to give him an actual flaw in his personality or update his power to make him stay fresh and away from the Gary Syndrome.