[quote=@Corpus Venenum]
'Kay, thanks for the input - gonna make a couple changes, tell me what you think.

Btw, I see what you mean about the Gary Stu thing - I for one tend to detest that particular character archetype, so making one accidentally is a bit worrying for me. However, it was not my intention to create such a character - in fact, I based this character on Shizuo Heiwajima, from Durarara!, with some alterations.
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I understand. You're (obviously) not the kind of person to go for a Gary Stu archetype, but it is pretty hard in general to make a "good guy" character without making him feel like a Stu.

On another note, I will look forward to the changes :D