(Here's a quick little review for Cops and Robbers, I know i'm not the best at this so i apologize in advance)

okay-wow. just wow! this was very well written, and although I feel like it was a darker type of story the frenzied, frantic pace of the song was very fitting. I certainly was not expecting the ending at all, and the way you omitted the major details left a certain sense of mystery which I really liked. I don't know how to explain it, but there's something both hopeful yet hopeless about this piece. it's like-people rebelling will be caught/killed eventually, but they'll still fight on because if not them, then who else? kind of reminds me of things like the alamo. anyway, overall great job and I really loved it!