Cops and Robbers: The story was good, the song was good, but they're completely incompatable. Really, it left me confused for quite a while why such an upbeat and fun song was chosen for a serious and even sad story. Unless you're intention was to have the reader continue thinking onwards that maybe Ashe was only pretending and was working on the inside instead of being a thrall. even if that was the intention, I can't help but say you failed. That aside, yeah, its good, but a suitable song is definitely necessary for it to be great.

Shades of White and Black: I love this. I really love this. The song and the story combine to a powerful wave of bleak confusion within one's self that they can't avoid. I just can't see much issues with this, story and all. I also love how the gender of the person is also unspecified, another great way to substitute the reader. This song and story just fills me with a sense of bleakness and futility, and I love that. Amazingly done. And I love it. Thats surprisingly hard to do, in my opinion XD