[quote=@Jozarin]
[@Dark Wind]
His, him. The main character is male. (This is in Go West).
Do you have any feedback on how to make that more obvious?
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You may want to reread Go West. The only times a gender specific pronoun is used is when referring to the side character, the boyfriend. The main character has no description and no gender specific qualities or identifiers. In fact, it is definitely implied that this is a homosexual love story from when the main character expresses their fear of their significant other leaving them for "a girl". Not, "another girl." But really, it's left up into interpretation for the reader.

Feedback? Gender specific descriptions, pronouns, or just details in general.