[quote=@Jozarin] [@Dark Wind] His, him. The main character is male. (This is in Go West). Do you have any feedback on how to make that more obvious? [/quote] Hah! I knew I forgot something in my review. I actually meant to ask that. Sorry that I made the assumption it was a she (I will edit that immediately). Aeonumbra pretty much covered the things you could do. Though, I don't know if I agree that "a girl" serves as a concrete and unbreakable implication of a homosexual romance. However, no need to break out into discussion over it here. But yes, added details. They don't have to be right in front of my face either. It could be an implied homosexual romance story with you throwing in hints. Perhaps the father threw out the main character because he is gay? There might be a way to imply that.