[quote=@RomanAria]Wow. I applaud you, [@PlatinumSkink], for getting all your reviews done so fast.[/quote]
Sat most of the day to do it.

[quote=@Kirah][@PlatinumSkink] I'm impressed, and thank you for the review! No offense taken here.[/quote] 
You're welcome~

[quote=@FernStone]And, [@PlatinumSkink], no offence taken at all. I entered this more for improving my writing than to win, and the only way to do that is to get negative or constructive feedback :P People IRL tend to give me too much positive feedback which really doesn't help when I know in the grand scheme of things I'm not that good a writer -.- So really I'm more saying thank you for the review, even though negative (though my reaction might have been worse if I was in a less neutral/emotionless mood but still, thanks)[/quote] 
Heh. You're welcome.

[quote=@Henzukaya]In particular, Platinum I noticed you may have sugarcoated (from what I can tell) your opinion on some of mine. No need for it, bring it on!! XD[/quote] I have no idea which one is yours (or any of the previous two's either for that matter). If you'd like me to read it again and see what I say, PM which one it is. I mean, if it is clear I didn't like it, then it is probably not one of the two I'm thinking of voting between, anyway.

[quote=@Jozarin]His, him. The main character is male. (This is in Go West).
Do you have any feedback on how to make that more obvious?[/quote]
... Wait, what? It was a guy? ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... Huh. Perhaps "My father threw me out today. His own son." or something to that degree. ... Not sure what this changes with the entry, though.