[@4weekcoma] A few things

1. She should be a bit heavier, at least like forty pounds heavier. She's pretty underweight for a 17 year old that's the average female height.

2. Her backstory cuts off a bit there at the end. Nor does it really explain too much about her past either. Like, you never explained why she's going to an Academy in Eagleland. The point of a backstory is to basically tell why your character is in the story, you didn't do that. 

3. I think the power section needs a little beefing up. You were very vague about what she can do. Like, what are the applications? Can she do more than just move water?

4. The weaknesses you mentioned aren't weaknesses, just limits. A limit is basically a restriction, like, "I can only do twenty pushups before getting tired". A weakness would be... "every time I do a pushup, I break my hand". Diego and Agni can be nullified by water, Luther gets dehydrated when he uses his waterbending, transforming for Michelle is painful. Those are just a few weaknesses.

5. The formatting could also use a little work. A few of the paragraphs could be merged together here and there.

Typing on my phone is a pain in the ass.