[@Tyler] Aw shit, I missed your sheet. Interesting character, he has a very fleshed out backstory. My gripe has to be the fact that he has no real weaknesses or drawbacks - only limits. He has quite a few abilities... teleportation, hiding in a mirror dimension (Where he's completely impervious to harm and doesn't age), remote viewing, and eventually a telekinetic control over mirrors... I want some weaknesses to balance all that out. There's also a few questions. What would happen if someone breaks his mirror? How far can he teleport/view? How many mirrors can he control? Also, he's a little underweight. He should be a bit heavier.

[@Apokalipse] What if a bit of the pain is reflected back on her? That should do.

Also, both your sheets are missing something important. Review the rules to find out what!