[@Shiinen] This character needs work. Let me run you through some stuff.

- Change that name... just change it.

- Asian don't usually have green eyes - it depends on what you mean by "mixed asian descent". Does that mean, she's like part Asian, and part Caucasian? 

- That hair is ridiculous. Hair to knees? Yeah... That's not even talking about the [i]technicolor hair[/i]!

- I don't think you're playing bipolar disorder with respect. Yeeeeeeeeeah, let's avoid mental disorders unless we know what we're talking about, okay?

- Otherwise, her personality could use some more detail. Once again, there isn't too much to her, honestly. You established that she's a nice girl with a mental disorder. But [i]what else?[/i] She doesn't seem all that interesting. What are her morals? What is she like when alone? What are her quirks/flaws/whatever? [url=http://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/28vbfi/ot_looking_to_develop_your_characters_heres_100/]Once again, I'm posting this[/url].

- Call me stupid, but I don't really get the power. So, if I'm correct, she emits magical waves that make people stronger, heal them, or etc, depending on their will to live?  


That is all. Now I'm going scuba diving with Jimi Hendrix.