CHARACTER:
Name: Walter
Age: Late 30's
Gender: Male
Physical Description (No pictures): Quite muscular, but short. His hair is starting to thin and his beard is flecked with grey. He lost several fingers on his left hand in a war.
Personal history: Originally a soldier to earn some coin, he left the army when his brother died. He went back to his home country of Chiron to become a blacksmith. He has two sisters who live in Elinor, and he quite often sends letters to them and his nephews.
Character traits (preferably as single-word adjectives such as ill-tempered, chivalrous etc.): Rough, proud (to the point of arrogance), with an idea of justice.
Skills:
Smithing
Archery (minor)
Sword and Shield
Maul
Heavy Armour

(I made these up, didn't see a skill reference)

Is this good? Should it be longer? I'm honestly not quite sure, this is my first advanced (and in fact any) RP here!