[quote=@Xikari chan]
I can't stop changing the words in the personality description >.< I can't word her personality properly. anyway, hope I get accepted. this looks like it's going to be really cool
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Personality looks fine, don't fuss too much.  :P

Just straighten it up a little (put the form in bold, it helps my OCD).  Also, we decided we're going to stick to more dated firearms, such as black-powder, so you'll have to change her zap gun to something else.  Other then that, everything is fine.