[quote=@Orior]
[@AllIsOne]
Alright, he looks awesome! I just have a few comments, but nothing too bad. I really like your character, he's not what I was expecting.

Even though his father is a King, he'd still pay some sort of homage to the Emperor, but the whole concept is fine (not necessarily complete sovereignty, but you get it [s]right?[/s]). That's just me being nit-picky. 

The only other issues I have are his abilities being just a bit too involved for costing 1 SP. Is there an upgrade to Quickness, the plus sign? Because then I believe you have one too many SP in your skeleton. For Illusion; what kind of illusion? Auditory, visual, or both? How big can it be? (Please remember that you will be able to upgrade these abilities.) The tracking seems a bit OP, so could you pick a terrain/environment he is a specialist in? 

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So I think I took care of the issues. As for the the size of his illusions, the bigger they are the less detailed they can be. So he could create an illusion of a table, but it would seem not so realistic, or he could create an apple that would look quite realistic.

[quote=@Razqua]
[@AllIsOne]
Cool. I like how you tied in my character to your reason for being in the city. I am curious though. Does Jakken know what Kragen looks like at all? He's a huge red bearded guy carrying a ridiculously large axe so he's kinda hard to miss.

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Well, since it probably makes sense that people would know what he looks like, I'll edit it in that Jakken heard the man has a huge axe and a beard.