[@Kalas] Since my league of Co-Gms are useless (Literally the worst Co-Gms), I decided to take action! My notes:


[quote][b]Name:[/b] 
Fletcher G. [b]Payne[/b][/quote]


Yeah, I think you should change his surname. I'm too fond of "Payne".


[quote][b]Hair Color:[/b]
[indent]Dark Grey[/indent][/quote]


Technicolor hair!
[sub]Really tho, he's waaaay too young to have grey hair. Unless it's dyed.[/sub]



[quote][b]Eye Color:[/b]
[indent]Hazel with a tint of Violet[/indent][/quote]


[sub]semi-[/sub]Technicolor eyes!


[quote]He sports a natural six-pack, though it remains wholly undefined by athletic standards.[/quote]


This is the first time I heard of the term "natural six pack". 

[quote]After years of make-believe sword fights, Fletcher can actually handle a weapon rather decently. Although he has had no formal training, he knows for sure which is the pointy end and how to cause a considerable amount of damage. Put him up against someone with actual training, however, and his form will surely crumble.[/quote]


This... feels iffy to me. What weapons does he actually know how to use? I doubt he'd do more than swing a weapon around.


[quote]... when Phantasms are changed into their attacking state, they become vulnerable to damage and can be shattered after a number of hits (6).[/quote]


What [i]kind[/i] of hits are we talking about here? Like, punches/kicks? Or the more devastating blows capable by Metahumans? How would they react to energy (Fire, Electricity, etc)? 

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That is all.