Well I got most of the application done.  Still have to draw things up so they should be done by tomorrow. Hopefully.  Now I'm expecting negative feedback but lay everything out there.  If it's decent let me know, if its trash.  I might have strayed from the norm of what people do on the site.  I don't care that I've spent 2 hours writing it so please be brutally honest.  I can't improve without criticism.

NOTE: All Work In Progresses are being hand drawn, please be patient I’m a little short on time.
Human name:  Daniel and Scarlet Everon
God/Goddess name: Exerevniste and Storge  (Greek)
Parents:  Theoi (God of Exploration) and Aphrodite (Greek Goddess of Love) 
Age: 12 (I know that’s young but read bio before rejecting)
Powers:  Note: Because of age their powers are still being discovered by themselves.  Therefore this list 		will be what they have already discovered.
	Daniel: Animalia tongue,  dowsing (ability to find hidden water with any random stick he grabs).  
	Scarlet:  Love Powder (ability to make powder that if ingested turns people and animals in love)
Human Appearance:  [url]http://dcat682.deviantart.com/art/Scarlet-528400899?q=gallery%3ADcat682&qo=0[/url]
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[url]http://dcat682.deviantart.com/art/Daniel-528400882?q=gallery%3ADcat682&qo=1[/url]
God/Goddess Appearance: Work In Progress
Symbol: [url]http://dcat682.deviantart.com/art/Exerevniste-and-Storge-s-Symbol-528401578[/url]
Weapon: N/A
Followers:  Mothers, Adventurers,
Animal: Deer (Love and Kindness)
Bio (aka the thing to prevent instant rejection):  Exerevniste and Storge, Adventure, Explore, Exploration, Love, Sibling Bond, Family Love.  These two gods and goddess are different but the same.  They were both born from the Greek god Theoi and Aphrodite.  They are both their own persons.  Exervniste and Storage are neither whole when separate nor broken alone.  They are the god/dess/es of the Family and Adventure.  
	These two are always found within the presence of each other.  Some might call them anti-social because they tend to keep to themselves, but their love of adventure and each other balances them.  They have never left the side of each other, and most likely never will.  They have been separated from their parents many times in the past.  Aphrodite lets Theoi take them into forests and Theoi then forgets about his children.  They’ve spent over four years living off the wild of the land, not all at once but over multiple trips where they’ve been left behind.  Exerevniste keeps them alive, while Storge keeps them sane.  Although Theoi and Aphrodite haven’t been the best parents of these twins, the twins have discovered powers because of their careless parents.  Upon discovery of their children’s power Aphrodite and Theoi begged for their children to be taught how to use their powers from the highest of the gods; even though their young age they were accepted to god school to be trained.
(I know this is a little out there but I have a feeling this can be pulled off and enhance the role play.  I know most people only use one character when they role play, but Exervniste and Storge can be argued to be the same being, just one who split himself in two.  They both think differently the way they’ve been “split” but they know each other so well nobody apart from them would be able to tell how different they are unless they became real close friends.)

Short Story Over =P