Friendly criticisms?

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[b]Name[/b]: Avery de Santis

[b]Age[/b]: 27

[b]Appearance[/b]: 5'6", 125 lbs, slim
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[b]Human, werewolf, or hunter?[/b]: Human

[s]If werewolf: Alpha, beta, or omega? [/s]

[s]If hunter: Were you born into it or did you become one by choice? [/s]

[b]If human, what is your life like[/b]?  Owns a small out-of-the-way bed and breakfast which pretty much takes up her life, despite the fairly low flow of visitors. Avery is a good business owner, but finds that the job has lost a lot of interest with the past year, though she thinks it's due to a creeping sense of uncertainty and loneliness. Although she is excellent at customer service, Avery has very little socialization outside the business and her vacations come in the form of solitary hikes. 

[b]Background[/b]: Avery moved to California to attend college while living in her paternal aunt's bed and breakfast as well as working there, leaving her mother and step-father back in Vermont. Although somewhat close to her mother once upon a time, Avery had a gut-deep dislike of her step-father, and moving away for college was the best way to get away from an uncomfortable home. She finished school at 23 and a couple weeks after she turned 25, her aunt passed away, leaving the B&B to the only other person who genuinely cared for it - Avery. 
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