[@Flora] What you did change looks great, but you didn't edit her spell. Could you do that as well?

[@Riaxh] Yeah, that would be better, something almost benign. I've let a few things of that nature by so go ahead.

Yes, [@Tracyarmav] was right, yesterday my boyfriend dragged me to a house clean out. >< I'm doing it now! But I have a school thing tomorrow so once I post it I'll be away. But after I post, if you are accepted, post! I'll probably still be on here on and off. I'm on the etherpad as well. 

EDIT: IC IS UP! Get your characters situated in the city or close to it.