Good to see you back, bluemoon.

Meta, be sure to go back and touch up the capitalization and punctuation of what you've already written when you add in bio and appearance.

Helve looks good, except for the bio.  The germina are very distrusting of magic, and the only way you might find one outside the germina sanctuary in Feldspar is if the germina has been exiled.  I expect that you missed the section on the Germina Cabal in the factions bit.  If I were you, Black, I'd work in that Helve's mother was one of the few magicians in the Cabal, how Helve's love of magic isolated her, and how her dabbling in Mortuus got her exiled, or something similar.