[@Cyclone] I would have appreciated if you posted it OOC first but nevermind that. I like it, I really do but I have one or two tid-bits:

-You may want to decrease how similar the Tin religion is to the certain religion I think you are aluding to, some people might find it offensive that you are trying to copy it.

-Add some brightness to it, the Arab culture is not just barbaric.

Otherwise I really liked it, gives me a taste of how your nation will function and maybe how things will pan out.