[@Kurai Assassin]
[hider=Delta Squad]
I like the idea behind this story. If I am to understand things, they are in some sort of simulation, but when they lose, they are killed for real? That is very intriguing. Why would someone join something like that? It kind of reminds me of Battle Royale or The Hunger Games. The same kind of feel at least.

Things that throw me off. There is next to no punctuation. The words in ( ) might come across looking better if they were also in italics. At least to me, they would stand out more and not be confusing.[/hider]
[@Psyga315]
[hider=Power, Figurative & Literal]
The writing is good, but I am not sure I get this. The setting does not feel realistic. The main character seems too overpowered, which is my personal pet peeve. It feels like this is a fanfiction for something I am clueless about. The idea is very interesting and I would love to see it more fleshed out and turned into an actual novel. 
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@Someone
[hider=A Thought About Power]
I really enjoyed reading this. It was very well written. Though I am confused as who the person telling the story is. 
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[@ScienMalefica]
[hider=Rainbow Oblivion]
The idea is quite interesting for sure, but just did not quite come together for me. I was more confused throughout reading this.
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[@NewSun]
[hider=Artificial Light]
The ending is really confusing. It feels unfinished. This also feels like something else, such as the whole things is coming from The Man's head and is not real, perhaps he is crazy or something. It feels like the artificial light represents something else. How could they survive without trees, let alone on artificial sunlight? 
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[@Darcs]
[hider=Long title... click]
I feel like this is probably written very well for what it is, but sadly, I do not understand many poems. I apologize. 
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[@WiseDragonGirl]
[hider=Object of Ultimate Power]
I am very sorry. I can not read this because it is all squished together. I did try, though. It needs spaces between the paragraphs. That might be a style choice, but it also makes it much easier to read. There is also some grammar mistakes that I caught on the first few paragraphs, such as the "d" in "Dr" not being an upper case letter.
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@SomeoneElse
[hider=Concur All]
Poem... I don't really understand poems, but I believe this is very well written.
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[@elitestpotato]
[hider=The Inevitable Destruction Of Reality]
Seems like this could be a little more fleshed out. It was over before I even started reading it. Having two people speak in the same paragraph is very confusing and just doesn't look great. Idea behind this is really interesting, but I wish there was more as I still am not sure what this is truly about. 
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@Someonewhoshallnotbenamed
[hider=Power, or the lack thereof]
I like the banner. Since this is a poem, I am sadly in the camp that does not really get much poetry. It is very sad; I wish I understood it more. I don't even get my own poetry. I really did like this though. With my limited knowledge of poems, I believe this is very well written. I hope that counts for something! [/hider]
[@Dark Wind]
[hider=Empowered]
Poems, how we do not get along. I like them and also do not really get most of them at the same time. This has a feeling of sadness, even though I don't quite get it, I can feel the feeling.[/hider]
[@RomanAria]
[hider=King]
This is the kind of poem I like, it feels like it more tells a story and I am not confused. Beautifully written. It really makes me wonder about the characters.[/hider]