Agreed to the criticism,[@PlatinumSkink]. The ending was flawed. We discovered the 13th had crept up on us, and we wouldn't be able to finish the story by the 17th due to being away from a computer we could type it on for several days then. We're still thinking of finishing it up as it should be finished. It just couldn't be done by the deadline here. The last bit was all written on a tablet, which went rather slowly and didn't have the true flow. The original intention was to have far more buildup after the first mention of the princess. But those characters and the deadline wouldn't let us! We honestly don't know where it would go towards the end there. That alone is reason enough to explore it.