[quote=@Elitestpotato]
I will start feedback soon. 
However it has come to my attention that no one can quite tell what my piece is about. I am happy with this out come. I will admit I know where I was going, and how everything connects. But I like to see it being interpeted in different ways. 
Also,  the length is due to the fact that I stumbled across this contest at 11 pm, the day before it was due And decided to write something quickly to submit. 
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Anything you care to add about your entry is more than welcome -- part of the point of getting rid of the 'anonymous entry' mandate was so authors could discuss what they wrote with people reading. 

Also (this applies to anyone, not just last-minute entries) -- I haven't set up the archive just yet, on account of, you know, we've only had the one contest finished so far. But when I do get it up, if you'd prefer to replace your submitted entry with an edited version (perhaps fleshed out after the deadline is past, or perhaps taking some critiques to heart and updating accordingly), we're planning on supporting that.