[@Genni]

There are a few points that feel wrong to us.

The nicknames seem… off… Something doesn’t feel “star wars-ey” about them.

The appearance and other basic details are ok. Nice explanation for tattoos.

When you refer to gaseous environments… Do you mean anything with a fairly normal atmosphere?

You put her as being grievously wounded, but had her brought to the temple for healing. In this era (3653 Before the Battle of Yavin), the best healers aren’t on Coruscant. They are found in the H’Ratth Academy, on the planet H’Ratth. Perhaps you had her first treated there, then brought to the temple for the final bits of recovery before redeployment? 

You mention she’s not good at deflecting blaster bolts back, yet give her Force Deflection. That doesn’t exactly rhyme. We’d suggest having only the tutaminis there. The way tutaminis works, she could absorb the energy from blaster bolts into her body and either diffuse it or channel it away completely. For regular deflection, use the lightsaber. Its much more reliable.

we assume you mean “Glee Anselm” rather than “Glee Anslam”, as the latter doesn’t appear in the wiki.
Jedi recruiters are fairly effective and as such, planets fairly distant from the front lines while still deep in the republic would be skimmed frequently for jedi candidates. How old do you imagine her being when recruited?
As the galaxy is at war, the Jedi was not too strict on age for their recruits. Against the Sith, they needed numbers. 

Recruits weren’t typically selected for a certain path of training, but they were often encouraged towards a path they were good at. If she showed aptitude for a guardian role, they would have encouraged her towards that.

When you reference ‘fly on the wind’ is that a figure of speech for force acrobatics? Or are you referencing actual levitation through the Force (which is an advanced and rare development of Telekinesis). If it’s just acrobatics, thats fine. We’d prefer not to see levitation in the game though, and if you were meaning that, going for just being a really good Force assisted acrobat would be advisable.

Failing the trials the first time is an interesting choice. Its nice to see someone not succeed on the first try.

I notice you mention Yoda and Anakin in your biography… Neither of them have been born yet, and won’t be for several thousand years. The RP is set just prior to the events of the game ‘Star Wars: The Old Republic’ 300 years after the events of the game ‘Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic.’

Also as a note, romantic involvement is allowed in this era, though it is not taken lightly. Typically it requires council approval for serious relationships to continue though, so her actions in that area can stay the same.

Your secret seems ok and acceptable, as does having Battle Meditation.