[quote=Savato]EDIT: [@Alan Hawke] Okay, Technique wise it's acceptable. However the general quality of the CS could use some work. We're not strict on this but I expect at the very least a paragraph on personality. The rest is fine I suppose. 

Also if you can put the links in the format that would make your CS prettier. C: 
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I +1 this. Simply put.. having 2 lines for personality and more than that on fighting style really means you put the focus on fighting. We want a 50/50 focus on fighting and interaction/character progression.