[quote=@lydyn]

Just a few concerns here and there, but before doing that - [i]this is actually a very well thought out character.[/i] ^.^ The part that concerns me first was his personality. I think it's fine to have some social awkwardness, I mean after all Cerylia isn't letting anyone that close for a while (maybe), but you took it a step further. It makes me cautious to whether he can actually work inside a group at all at this point.

Second was the flaws. The first one listed is the same concern as above - if he can't work well with others, how can we expect him to group up with everyone and go on this adventure? I almost see him as just leaving the group and having his own private adventure, away from this RP... which I don't want to see. The second one really isn't a flaw, because no enemy could realistically take advantage of it. There are thousands of people who don't know magic (since it takes study, which I should note, but thought it was obvious haha) so it's not exactly a specific flaw that a character has... someone without combat knowledge in a fight can be taken specific advantage of by getting in their face with a mace - see? There's no [i]real[/i] downfall to not knowing magic.

The last minor nick pick is, it's unlikely a fight would last a full day, let alone both parties having the endurance to fight for so long. ^.^ Otherwise, I really do like the character. He seems much more like a jack of trades wilderness person than a ranger, so that's cool.

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Okay, I'll tweak his personality to make it clear that he's more 'abrasive' than 'totally incapable of camraderie'. I'll also fix the flaws while I'm on, just to add more emphasis to the whole 'can only fight on his terms' part of it. I guess I sort of misinterpreted the 'flaws' section, so I'll handle it.

Oh, and just to clarify, I didn't mean that he and the ogre were like, actually fighting for a whole day, more that it took him a whole day of leading it around and annoying it and snaring it before it actually died. It would have been more like, attack, fight for a bit, Tobias runs off, they lick their wounds for an hour or so, repeat.