Did the first three. More will be coming.

[@Kurai Assassin]
[hider=Delta Squad]This was very sloppy. There seems to be no proof reading done at all here. There is no real reason why this is happening and why this is necessary. You give us a very vague answer that doesn't make much sense. The action happens abruptly and it isn't very entertaining. The concept was okay., but the execution needs some work. [/hider]

[@Psyga315]
[hider=Power, Figurative and Literal]So, who exactly [i]is[/i] the main character? Is he Static Shock? Because I have no idea what his name even is. Or how exactly he got his powers. Or what in the hell he is talking about with his brother. I feel like you wanted to have some emotion in this but the characters don't make me care about them. There is no background to give them life.[/hider]

[hider=A Thought About Power]
Holy shit. This was pretty awesome. The action was great the emotional hit just right. There's honestly not much I can say about this critically. Maybe tie together the intro and the story a bit more, because the intro doesn't really tie into the story too well. I understand that it's supposed to set the story up, but that could of just as easily been left out and the story would be just as good. This was really good though. [/hider]