[quote=@Heat] [@Jpp188] It's better but I still have an issue. Him managing to establish a thieve's guild that "owns" a city by having the ultimate influence over it at age 22, that's a huge thing for someone so young. Maybe age him a bit or reduce the guild's power? [/quote] Or you can have him inherit it in a way. That's how I'd do it. Anyway, I'm going to conceive a character for this here RP because I can't find the bliss of sleep.