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bio, 3rd para:
 and to caught some > and to catch some [i]or[/i] and caught some

Why did she not enjoy the peace?
Try to give a reason she did not enjoy it.

Something still feels off about this flaw:
“Inexperience of being a Jedi at her age”

A jedi of thirty years will naturally have more experience than one of sixteen, but that doesn’t mean she’s inexperienced. Someone can be her age and be very skilled, or they can be much older and have less experience. Had she been ten or so, then age and experience would be much more closely related.

It is far more likely that the ever-present war has affected her training. It probably isn’t intentionally, but the effect is there nonetheless. It might be a better flaw to focus on how the war affected her training and how never truly knowing peace has affected her.

It is perfectly reasonable for her to have little skill at fighting. Her experience in combat comes from being behind friendly lines, not from fighting in or beyond the front lines.

Fallen additions

Personality: I’m not sure if she had that before, and I missed it, but the torture hasn’t started yet so it’s not easy to predict how she will be affected. Namely as the Jedi Prisoners don’t know what the Sith Players will do or what challenges are planned yet. I suggest to make the attitude you mention be more general as in she can be easily discouraged in dark, gloomy situations rather than just because of the torture.
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In addition, the Sith that have been posted CSes: we're still waiting on revisions to be made. These can still be approved as Sith as the reference to Sith being closed was made to any new interest and anyone who's not delivered a solid idea of their PC before it was closed.