[quote=@my Lalia] [hider=Jedi Blokere Dystraay] [centre][b]Name: [/b] Blokere Dystraay [b]Species: [/b] Zabrak [b]Age: [/b] 28 [b]Gender: [/b] male [b]Faction: [/b] Jedi Order [b]Rank: [/b] Jedi Knight [b]Captive? [/b] No, he's going to rescue peoples butts and kick some butt! [b]Appearance: [/b] [hider=Blokere] [img]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/199/b/a/baf5f76bcfc730d569cf200227217fb0-d6e1oec.jpg[/img] [/hider] Being pure Zabrak, Blokere has all the traits of his people. He has red skin and thirteen orat crowning his head. He is a tall, lean and muscular man standing about 6'3. His Jat'o and Jat'i are black in colour. He has red eyes that match his skin and no hair. Blokere wears the normal Jedi clothing, though he [b]Notable Race Traits: [/b] [u]Red Skin[/u] - Being a Zabrak means having different coloured skin and vibrant Jat'o and Jat'i, which give away his clan and family heritage. (to those that know how to read them) [u]Horns/Orat/Nails [/u]- His orat are a durable and sharp which can rip through flesh if need be, the way they are placed on his head is also a sign of his clan on his homeworld. His fingernails are sturdy and sharp and can cut through flesh just like his horns, if not better. [u]Eyesight[/u] - Zabrak's have great eye sight and can see colours more sharply, but they can also see in near darkness. (like a cat) [u]Skeleton[/u] - His skeletal structure is denser and more rigid than most other species, which makes it hard to break. [u]Hearing/Smelling[/u] - Since Zabrak's are carnivores by nature they have a heightened sense of smell and hearing, with scent being stronger of the two. A Zabrak can recognize a person by their smell, what possibly their emotional state is at the time of meeting. [u]Pain Tolerance[/u] - Zabrak's are known for their high resistance to pain when it comes to torture and serious wounds. [u]Extreme Heat Tolerance[/u] - Coming from a dry and hot planet, Blokere is able to tolerate much higher temperatures of heat and for much longer than most species. [b]Flaws: [/b] [u]Cold Tolerance[/u] - Because his species and tolerate high heat, means that they were ill suited for cold conditions [u]Eye Sight[/u] - Even though his species has great eye sight, they can't adapt to sudden changes in light, so a flash bang will hurt them. [u]Pain Tolerance[/u] - Even though Zabrak's can take a beating, sometimes they can forget that they need to take time to rest and heal. [u]Immunity to Disease[/u] - Though his kind are hardy and rarely get sick, if an ailment does strike them it usually means something is seriously wrong. Most will be unable to do much other than rest and hope to recover. [u]Skeleton[/u] - Because Zabrak's skeletons are naturally dense means that they lack the speed of some other species. Plus breaking a bone is a pain in the arse, and takes a long time to heal. [u]Pride[/u] - Because his species are a proud people, they don't take kindly to insults or threats even if the threat was a bluff. (Someone going to get a hurt real bad) [b]Skills: [/b] [u]Being a Iridonian[/u] - Speaking Ul’ Zabrak, hunting, tracking, practice combat and martial art training are skills highly prized by the Zabrak, including himself. [u]Lightsaber combat [/u]- [u]Hand to Hand Combat[/u] - Being from a culture of warriors, it is only right that he learned that art of fighting without weapons. [u]Quick Thinking[/u] - He can make up his mind quickly and make up another plan fast if in a pinch [u]Calmer/Soother[/u] - He can calm just about anyone and help sooth their pain, he's not sure how he doesn't it, he only knows he can. [b]Force capabilities: [/b] - All basic Force abilities - Force Empathy - Tutaminis (adv) - Revitalize [b]Biography: [/b] Blokere Dystraay was born on his peoples homeworld, Iridonia, to his Father Bekk and his Mother Dret. He was an only child as there were many complications during his birth which nearly caused the death of his mother. In fear of having more complications or possibly death, his parents chose to only have him. With only one child they devoted much love and care to their son, while also teaching him what it meant to be a Zabrak. His father took him on many hunting trips and taught him the value of respecting nature and the thing you are hunting. "No matter how smart or how simple the thing you are hunting is, always show respect and never under estimate." Was a saying that his father always repeated every trip. From his fathers teachings he became a good hunter and tracker, and from his mother he learned the art of combat. His ability to use the force became known when his mother nearly dropped a plate while cleaning. Instead of the plate shattering on the floor like it should have, it was floating in the air and placed gently on the ground. His parents became dismayed as they had no idea how to use the force, but wanting only the best for their son they contacted the Jedi. Blokere was only eight years old when a human Jedi came and took him to Coruscant to be trained. There he flourished and learned, though it was noted that his pride could get in the way of his training. But as he was going into puberty the Jedi sent him home, in order to undergo the rite of passage that only his Clan could preform. During this trying time when his hormones were in flux, he took those time to meditate and strengthen his connection with the force. While others that were undergoing the change as well were causing trouble and fighting, he was in a calm state and finding peace in what he had learned from his master Olin Avith. When it came time to take the Res Selenoren he felt ready for it, he knew that his Rite would be harder than the others as he had the force. The tests tested him physically, mentally and emotionally and once he completed them he proved himself worthy of being one of the clan. Shortly after the Rite he got his Jat'o and his Jat'i, and he wears them proudly. Once all the Rites had been preformed he went back to Coruscant to continue his training with Master Olin Avith. He spent many years learning and making mistakes, but with the stern and gentle hand of his master he was guided to a greater understanding of the Force and finding peace. But still he finds it hard to not to feel for his aging parents, he knows he can love them but having strong attachments can lead to a fall if not properly managed. But despite this he became a Jedi Knight, ready to take an apprentice..... or maybe later. Getting proper leave to visit his parents, he went to his homeworld. Upon getting there his mother took him to her original Clan, but instead of being greeted with smiles, they were told that Taishma had been seriously hurt. Blokere could feel the pain of those around him as if it was his own, he wished to help them. But they were to late in getting there and he knew that Taishma would soon die. He watched as the family and clan went into mourning, that was when he noticed that two of the children were force sensitive. He couldn't help but wonder why he hadn't seen them in the Jedi temple. He wished to talk to them, but his mother told him not to. While away from Coruscant on unofficial business he got news that the Temple had been attacked, his first instinct was to rush back. But the words of his old Master and his father came to mind. He would have to go about this with a sound and clear mind, make a plan and act on it. [b]Personality and/or Motivation: [/b] Blokere can be hard headed at times, but mostly he trusts his gut and thinks thing through. (which is why most think he is hard headed) He can be an idealist with wanting to do things so everyone benefits, even if its not practical. He likes to find peace, even in the small things, he has to with all the horror he has seen in the galaxy. He is clever or at least he thinks he is, as he always finds a way to get out of trouble. (that's after getting himself into it in the first place) He has a habit of rubbing the back of his neck when he is confused, stressed, frustrated, or tired. (so he his rubbing his neck nearly all the time.) Blokere tries to find time to meditate each day as he tends to get cranky if he doesn't, its a habit he doesn't intend to break anytime soon. [u]Dark Side[/u] In order to make Blokere turn to the dark side, one must give him a damn good reason to turn. They can threaten and/or kill what little family he has, he will not budge. But maybe romantic love will be his down fall, as thats one thing he wishes to have. [u]Light Side[/u] Blokere is strong in the force and keeps to its code strictly, he finds no greater peace anywhere else in all the galaxy. And he puts others before himself in nearly all things. [b]Player’s long term goals: [/b] Blokere wishes to save those of the Order and if possible save those that had fallen to the dark side. He will meet this goal even if it means death for him. "There is no greater sacrifice, than giving ones life for another. No matter how unworthy they might be." [b]Relations: [/b] [u]Olin Avith[/u] - He was Blokere's Jedi Master for many years and a strong willed man that believed in his padawan. Last the Blokere heard was that he was at the Jedi temple when it was sacked. [u]Jayda Mirthios[/u] - He didn't know her personally, but he knew that she was part of his mothers old Clan. He also knows that she is force sensitive and was hurting the last time he saw her. He wonders about her often. [b]Final Point - Secrets: [/b] N/A at the moment.[/centre] [/hider] There we go, let me know what needs to be changed or added :) [/quote] Re-read one of the last bits "Players" long term goals not characters :P Also again, if you visited Manaan in the past couple of years we can add Koren onto your relations bit. Maybe come up with a story.