[quote=@Pietra] It's totally fine, Marik, I'm 19 too- I'm completely ignorant about a lot of things, like sports, and lots of components of history. Just one thing; I mentioned in the post where I introduced Carla that she was trained in the Marine Corps alongside Rose... so she wouldn't be as clueless as you're writing her. Believe it or not, policemen are actually pretty badass sometimes, and not all of them are corrupt. The vast majority are well trained, and really, really good at handling criminals. I thought it was pretty obvious that Carla would have disarmed your character before putting him in the vehicle, that it didn't need saying. Making policemen out to be idiots, especially ones previously in the Marine Corps, even in fiction, is incredibly insulting. Just... no. That's so disrespectful of the people who protect our country from within, the people who risk their lives daily to save others. Carla is a junior police detective, previously trained in the Marine Corps. [url=http://work.chron.com/skills-abilities-marine-22538.html]Here's[/url] a link to see what's required of Marines, and [url=http://learn.org/articles/What_are_the_Requirements_for_Becoming_a_Police_Detective.html]here[/url] to see what's required for detectives. Yeah. See the problem with how you portrayed her, as a fumbling idiot? [/quote] Uh, it’s almost like you’re saying I don’t respect the police, which I do. Let me remind you that I am playing a fictional criminal with fictional values who just may fictionally kill a few cops because he feels like it, so you’ll have to excuse me for wanting to do a badass thing in a universe where the GM said himself that the police force may not be as smart as they should be. I’m sorry if you’re insulted by this, but it’s all fun and games. If I were to write a song with words in it like “Fuck the police” it might actually be bringing up issues with the system in place, and not just a forward insult to the people in question. All I’m saying is, try not to take this so seriously. Now, I’ll wait for the GM to take a look at this and if he feels I need to, I’ll edit my post again, but at the moment I don’t really have the time.