[@Hael]

Back to the topic of stuff my insane little duelist did, I figured that for this RP I'd take a go at giving my characters some depth. Usually they're pretty one-dimensional.

...and I know I failed utterly to give Babur's brothers any depth. I thought about adding one flashback that would humankze Dhiyar, but he really was supposed to be a decadent asshole and somebosy that Babur almost never even talked to. That, and warming readers to him just before having Babur plunge a dagger through his eye ten paragraphs down would make me feel like George R. R. Martin.

While we're here, how goes your history with Tin? :P