Alright, here's what I've got, and pay attention because I won't be repeating myself and any changes that need to be made are non-negotiable.

I will edit this post as we go along so always come back here to look at the situation report on characters.

Andrei Pasternak - My character, don't see why I'd need to approve myself, but he could use some touching up, which I will do eventually.

Raid-Bot: Approved

Esmeralda: This first part isn't the most important, but you don't have to point out that she is 'short' if you've already given the height, and neither do we need the clarification of 'just Esmeralda'. I'm sure we could figure it out for ourselves, let's keep it a bit more professional. 

Second, I'm not so certain about the 'sharp shooting' abilities of an Uzi and a handgun, the only sharp shooting you'll be able to do with those is at close range. If close range is what you meant, then clarify.

Malcolm Crowley: Approved

Fallan: Approved

Rudy Rodgers: Approved.

Henry Direson: Approved. 

Vincent James Clarke: Approved.

John Bridger: Approved

France Kota: The only reason I'm approving this character despite the completely made up information regarding North Carolina and this Kannon City is because it is well-written and doesn't have a big impact on our story. This is the only time I'm letting this happen, any further character info has to come from the lore in the Information Post or the official lore, [b]no exceptions[/b]. 

That goes for all of you.

Sophia Quilla: Approved

Sarah Sinclair: Approved.




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And for fuck's sake, stop using art from other games as a reference for your character. The picture for Henry is from Dirty Bomb, and the one for Sarah is clearly a female rendition of the TF2 Sniper. It may only be two of you that have done this so far but I don't want to see any more of it. Unless you drew the pictures yourself (and have proof that you did) keep it out of here.