[@fantasyfan28] Could you put that in a hider please?

As for the actual CS you're going to need to add on content on [b]personality, history and dreams and fears.[/b]

Besides ignoring the CS skeleton's coding (not a huge problem, I suppose) I think that

[quote]Trained in the use of the scimiter since he was five, a competent archer, both on horseback and on foot. He is well versed in brawling and several types of fighting the peoples of Ib-Wahad Sultanate have perfected.[/quote] might be a bit over the top, considering he already has a large amount of skills. 

[quote]His style is unorthodox, it can be seen as reckless, with his two weapons fighting style Ebn is more focused on attack than defense, his strikes are all lightning fast and he is extremely nimble, the use of flips, kicks and rolls are usually added to aid him, [/quote]
This sounds like something I'm trying to avoid (flips and rolls are.. not plausible mid battle in a battlefield, and somewhat more possible, but still not really that realistic even in a 1 on 1 duel.) and at the moment he sounds more like an assassin who also knows how to be a soldier than.. anything else.

At the moment this looks like a low-casual level character, and I'm looking for something with a bit more depth. I hope you can understand that you'll need to either add on, or rework on a new character?