[@Partisan]:  [s]I'll work on the personality a bit more[/s], but is there anything else I need to fix?  I tried my best on personality, but that's one of the hardest parts of a bio for me to write.

Also, I think 7-8 characters is adequate for this roleplay.  More characters offers more dynamic, but sometimes it gets convoluted, especially if some of us get really busy.  Then again, I guess that's why this is 'Advanced Roleplaying'.

And I also think the addition of other characters, whether they're controlled by us or others, would be interesting too.